题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;作者词汇基础挺好,能灵活使用部分学术词汇,但词汇拼写要再接再厉。
Nowadays,with the rapid development of society,the trust become more and more essential.Especially when you are trading with someone,communicating others,but how to maintain trust,that would be a question and the skills that you should learn. there are some reasons why we should noticed.First of all,the trust is established on two party's,remember do not lie to others,therwise, you will lose trust from others.Talking with friends as soon as possible.Secondly, keeping your promises when you have arranged before.it's undesirable for you to break your promises,told others the reasons if you could not obey the words.Do not make other that you are cheating them.Last but not least, to strengen yourself is essentialand enhance your personal cultivation and have goodwill toward also necessary. it's a long learing process on maintaining trust,only have we possess the trust ,then we could get well along with others.Without the trust,it's easier to occurred misunderstanding.