2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

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In 1960, life expectancy was about 40 years old. In 1990, the life expectancy was increasing around 17 years old which is 57 years old. In addition, baby was 175 deaths per 1000 births in 1960. In 1990, the infant mortality was decreasing, which is 100 deaths per 1000 births. Firstly,with the development of technology, many people don't suffer from hunger, disease.people's life are changed, and become more and more better than before.In recent years, people have enough money to see the doctor and buy food. As a result, food crisis and disease are far away in people's life. Then an increasing number of entertainment is created by business, people can have fun in their life, and happy every day.