2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，注意文中少数拼写错误；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

computer have inter our life ,we use computer on work .some people may think we can in place of man .and some work already use computer purely.what we can do when we face the storm of computer?Plan one we give it up .Plan two take the computer more inttlegence.it is a big problem for human being to choice ,