文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写方面也要加强;简单句偏多,应增加从句使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。
I have a good friend and her name is LISA.She like delicious food.We met at a reading party.we introduce ourself each other but we cloudn't communicate because I come from China, she come from USA. I like English very much,but I cannot read English book at all.She said that"you need remember vocublary.