2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

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It is not wise to Make Friends online The internet changes our living style in many aspects,which including the way we make friends.As we can see,nowadays,millions of young people make friends through Internet.Obviously ,numerous teenagers enjoy the online friends brought to them,and they give applause to the method.But opposite to the pro one,I can hardly be approved of the idea. First,being absorbed in Internet would occupy their time planned for study.Teenagers,a young,sensitive group,as well as we know,can not control extreme passion.In this situation,their study may be delayed.Second,paying attention to the friends online lead person neglect the real friend beside.All attention was given to the cyber friends,their true friends may be frustrated,and the friendship may get hurt.Third,friendship online may be a kind of trick,and the so called friends will do harm to teenagers' property or safety.Various crime set on Internet.It is dangerous to trust the friends online. The true friends can not be got easily through sweet words on Internet but long time accompany.I hold the firm position that it is unwise to make friends online.