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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33549
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

if one thing can be more cheaper, so why not buy it? i personally hold the opinion that using less money to buy more. it is common for us to keep some coupons, look for group-buy deals or even buy clothes on sale. one main reason is that we are short of money so cheaper things are our preferred chooses. besides, we are not aiming to catch the current fashion trend, so those on sale are acceptable. in fact, those on sale are always very good deals. however, i want to present that cheaper things are not the excuss of buying too much. in conclusion, we persure more economic style of shopping, that is to say, cheap and just.

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