作者词汇量偏少,也有些单词拼写错误;能够使用一些简单的从句;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。
I have a friend, her name is Gaojie, she is very beautiful, and her study is the best in our class, so we usually ask questions for her. She is a girl with good heart, many students like make friend with her, she always teach us the method of study. For example, my English is very bad, I'm very worried about my English exam. When she knows, she told me the method of how to