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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6292
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文中词汇丰富度和学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,文中有较多拼写错误;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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If I ask you what is important for you in the relationship? You may say the skills of staying relationship. OK,that's very righte! so, today,I will talk about trust what is one of the skills to make the relationship longer between you and your friends. I belive the trust is the brige of the relationship.so ,how do we build the relationship ? and how do we maintain the relationship? First, you must treat the friends around of you sincerely, do want you can do to help them. next, it's very crucial for you to hold the extra party to enhance each other's feeling. Then, we also can strenthen the feelings through the phone,may just one word, but that's also important.Finally,more contact and more trust. Ok ,what should we do to maintain the trust I have woite down.Thank you !

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