2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

there is a will, there is a way. the old saying tells us nothing can be achieved with a weak will. A genius is 1% gift and 99% hard work. all the hard work need strong will. Many great accomplishments also come out through thousands of failures. only strong will can make the heroes survive and insist from those frustrations, walking out to the final victory. So it's true with students in learning. learning is long and painful process which require you have a strong will to hold on. In the ancient times, the national champion need ten years learning to get the highest honor in the emperor's court. many people see that glorious moment, but nobody has seen the bitter ten years. today the students start at big beginning, quit half way. the students who are one day learning, two days fun. The students want to find a shortcut to success or succeed on dishonest basis. They will finally get nowhere. after all, what you sow, what you gain. only The strong will sunshine can make flower of the success bolossum