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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17439
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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With the rapid development of science and technology,the computer plays a more and more important role.however,When conputer was created,it was unpopular,and someone said,not every family would had one,but he is wrong.Nowadays,computer becomes smarter and lighter,everybody needs it. Computer with the Internet change the world,it let people in different cities, different regions, different countries can communicate, it opened a big world, we can through the computer and network to know a new world.Computer programming is now a special important things, maybe people have never thought it the virtual things can take effect of the world so big. Shopping online,online games,we also can learning and business communication online,Computer is really convenient for our life.Everything has two sides,it also has a bad place. It will make teenagers addicted,it can spread unhealthy information,it also can spread the virus, and make our important information loss. We should use computer in right way,and it's just a common thing, all depends on us.we can make computer better,means we also can make our world better.

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