题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
With the rapid development of science and technology,the computer plays a more and more important role.However,when computer was created,it was unpopular,and someone said,not every family would had one,but he is wrong.Nowadays,computer becomes smarter and lighter,everybody needs it. Computer with the Internet change the world,it let people that in the different cities, different regions, different countries can communicate with each other, it opened a big world, we can through the computer and network to know a new world.Computer programming is now an important things, maybe people have never thought the virtual things can take effect of the world so big. We can use computer do many things,shopping online and online games,we also can learning and business communication online,Computer is really convenient for our life.Everything has two sides,it also has a bad place. It will make teenagers addicted,it can spread unhealthy information,it also can spread the virus, and make our important information lost. We should use computers in the right way,and it's just a common thing, all depends on us.We can make computer better,means we also can make our world better.