2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；文章层次较为清晰；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

Recently, some people criticism the charity business and department by their not really help people in need. Some reasons contribute to this phenomenon.For one thing,the governmen doesn't pay emphasis on supervise so that someone illegal use the charity money .For other thing,we often see and hear that the news report the charity not use all the money to help people just a part of money. In my opinion ,i think we should take some actions to protect how we sue the money form charity.for example,laws and regulation should be work out and the government should pay more attention to supervise .Only in this way are we charity business will become more and more better.