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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

This cartoon points out a serious problem which needs to be taken seriously: “What is a positive attitude towards nourishment?” Misconception prevails nowadays all over the world that nourishment can make the weak strong and the sick healthy. For those who believe in this kind of theory, such omnipotent nourishment is allcures. So they take this kind of magical nourishment excessively. However, this is far from the truth. Taking nourishment to ensure your health is nothing but an illusion. Moreover, a great amount of fake nourishment is flooded with in the markets, which will thus deteriorate your health after continual use.   From the analysis above we can easily draw a conclusion: a wish is a wish, no matter how sweet it is. A good wish, however, doesnt mean a real life! In reality, life blooms with doing exercises and taking part in sports. Besides, proper diets are also a rewarded way to keep you fit and healthy. Give up the idea of “more nourishment and more health” and you will build a muscular body in the long run.

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