小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend ,she is a beautiful girl ,she have a long black hair,two big black eyes,and a red month she has so small and handsome ,she good like reading books ,we often go back home in together ,l used to her home ,she has a virtuous mother and so appeal father . .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................