2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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It's believed that the best time in the whole life is in campus,we had the genuine friendship and pure honest.But there are some negative phenomenon in school.such as sleeping later,waste consuming and addict to games. There are many reasons about above,But the most important is lacking of self-manager ability.They seem the time