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Recently,a new policy has been to public that a family can get another baby if either the wife orr husband is the only child in his/her family. It is obvious that one-child policy which effectively control the increasing problem,but,at the same time,lead to other troubles such as aging society,shortage of labour as well as heavier burden for adults on supporting at least four old people and a child's life.Besides,selfish in one's character caused by overlove makes children not easy to get along well with.Therefore,one-child policy seems not so suitable for our current economic or social situation any longer. In order to improve even solve the problem,the new policy will be given birth to.Objectively,it is a relatively better ideal resolution.Not only will it provide sufficient human resources,but also slow the proceed of aging problem. As a whole,I am firmly convinced that with more skillful talents are anxiously involved,after the revolutin of electronic and atomatic machine,Only through taking full advantage of chinese numerous population,can we turn the embarrassing population into a strong motivation to stimulate our economy.