2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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With the development of the society,more and more goods can be concerned.Followed by it,there is a number of merchants,they make up with many ideas for interests.The result is the phenomenon of on excessive packaging is coming. To our surprise,we find a little goods when we spend much money on it.That is the hard to avoid angering.However It become a tendency. In my opinion,the phenomenon of excessive packaging is a stupid way,because the practice of merchants is not a long plan,it will cause the loss of customers.On excessive packaging is not make a profit ,on the contrary ,it will decline.I hope the merchants can realize it and find the good way to get a lot of interests.