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how should parents help children to be independent? Now more and more parents help their children do everything so that young people depend on their parents so much. Recently,the problem become so serious. The reason is not only still children are disable ,but also parents overlove their his children. On the hand,many parents have one child , they are love their child so much. It's easy to cause to overlove their child and they mislead what is good to their children' development. many parents didn't teach their children do some basic housework such as cooking,cleaning the room,wash clothes and so on. Many children are able to do nothing except learning, passing exam. On the other hand, With the development of social everything mustn't children do it in school. Children don't know how to living by themself. Once they come to university,they are hard living by themself. besides,They may are afraid of coming to university. It's cause so many problem. In my opinion,parents should not only help children study hardly but also teach their living. they shouldn't help their children do everything or avoid solving their problem by themslves.
