题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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It has become a prevailing trend for parents to sends their children to art classes of kinds.To this phenomenon,some people hold the positive view.They claim that attending art classes can help nuture chilaren's interest and tap their potentials in arts such as painting ,music and dancing .This ,they believe ,will contribute to children's all-round development. Others,however,hold the opposite view.They argue that not all children are intended or talented in art,or a child may not be fond of all forms of art.Forcing these children to go to art classes will burden the children already bureid in the piles of school work.Worse still,it deprives them of right and chance to discover their hidden talents. Personally,i believe that art education benefits children,that going to art classes is an effective means find out and give full play to children's talent in art and it is conductive to their sound development.But before deciding what kinds of art kind of art classes to their children to,parents should take kid's interests and will into considersion.After all,as the saying goes ,the fittest is the best.