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2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

发布时间:2013-06-08 00:13浏览次数:2274
要求:
Government money should support more important things rather than artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
写作思路
第一段:引入话题,艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段:科学研究与社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平,如科技,教育,医疗。但是这些只能满足人们的物质需求。
第三段:政府需要投资艺术,因为:
1. 人类有多重的需求,艺术是表达感情和思想的渠道,原始社会就有艺术形式的存在。艺术不活跃,导致思想僵化,科技和经济发展迟滞。高度文明的社会总是伴随着繁荣的文化和艺术
2. 艺术和文化有地域特点,是国家团结的一个纽带
3. 艺术提供看世界的多重视角,培养人的创造和创新能力
第四段:政府应该既投资社会基础服务,也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会.
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文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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Art is always the specific part of the nature.Nowadays,many people argue that it shouldn't under the support of the government. It cannot be denied that art can affect people's motion and temperament.Leaded by art,we start to watching the surroundings in a different aspect, trying to employ the new fields and finally enjoying the fantastic feelings.From this point,art is inevitably not divided into the useless subjects with its contribution to the improvement of human's lifestyle. However,I approve the opinion which I mentioned above.In today's society,hierarchy still exists.Upper class devote themselves to pursuing the beauty of art while lower class worries about the insufficient food.Money should be spent on the splade.So,government should pay more attention to the poor.From another perspective,the development of science needs financial support.And that is the fundamental of our real world contract to the wispy art.If art occupies too much time and energy of us,technology will not step forward.It is terrified to thinking of the image that thousands and thousands of people gather to talk about art with crops rot in the fields. In a consequence,art can be everyone's interest and hobby as well as someone' full-time job who has that talent instead of everyone's wholly life.Therefore,I suppose government transforms the money for art to science's evolution and take more actions to increase the quality of life。

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