高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In the past, my hometown is a small town where rounded with green trees. And the river is so clear that fish play happily in it. Although the house is simply the low, the street was so narrow, Pelple word hard with poor life. Now, high building is full of the town, kinds of cars running fast among the street. The development of industry lead to envirment turing down; Trees are cutted down and fishes disappeared. Deal with the pollution should be as soon as possible.