题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
能够使用一些简单的从句;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;词汇稍欠丰富,且拼写错误比较多;可以适当增加副词的使用。
With the development of our society, the phonomenon that weeking trust between people definately puzzle us.For example,we can see ads that amplify functions as the fact just turn to the rival. so do i think that trust is a bridge between people,we can do nothing without it.to achieve it ,we have to do something at first with essential,both the goverment and our fellows. goverment should do something with legal to grant the the cheat be punished,guiding our mental development to pure our thought. as our students,we should be honest at first,make sure that our behavior can sunshine our society,