2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；采用了一些简单的从句；请注意分段。

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will everyone know hard work is very important .but a strong though is very important.because a strong though is become success a good way. so we need really face our think. if you have a strong though ,you can end a great thing .at the same time student just like this ,if you not hard study ,you will faith.if you want go to a great university ,you must hard student as time passed,we are growing. we will face our a life,our different choose will have different a life.so a strong though can keep our a life .when one people choose a strong though,his success will become very fast .as so MARX become a best great people Now we are student, we should study following the MARX.