2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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As far as i see ,In oder to help the children to be independent ,we shouldn't do too mach for theys .And i'm make out three poits for the advice.Firstly ,the parent shoud set a good example at the things in life.Scendly, the childern should be permit to have their own space to do what they thing they want to do .Thirdly, the parent should let them go to school by themself rather than send them to school caringly. All in all, the lovely child is the flowers,we must care about them to glow healthly .Besides, we must to keep a balance between careing and independent.