2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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As far as I see, In oder to help the children to be independent, we shouldn't do too mach for them. And I'm making out three points for the advice.Firstly ,the parent shoud set a good example at the things in life.Scendly, the children should be permit to having their own space to do what they thing they want to do. Thirdly, the parent should let them go to school by themselves rather than send them to school. All in all, the lovely child is the flowers,we must care about them to glow healthily.Besides, we must keep a balance between caring and independent.