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There is a Phenomenon that children can not be independent .Some people think how did it happend?There are some reasons:first,a lot of parents help their children do many things,such as wash cloth and so on.second,children like play games and watch TV,they are used to following their parents' arragement. So,How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?In my view,parents can help their children by following methods.First,parents should let children do what they can do,such as wash cloth and buy the things themselves need.What's more,parents can let children choose their subjects if they like.Parents should belive their children and encourage them to become stronger.