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In the recent days, a heated issue which six students who share a dorm at a college rent a cleaning worker was booming wispread the website. The information not only shocked everybody's mind but brought a lot of thoughts of the mass. As for me, a sophere in campus hire cleaners to avoid cleaning by yourselves is not a good behavior. When you take part in the normal university's life, you should shoulder some responsibilities as the preparation before you leave your home. It is a necessary step that we learn plenty of technical knowledge, and much as some basic skills like cleaning, washing clothes, ect. If someone rent another to replace his duty,his ability which adapt to this society would decreased sharply.The following I want to concern is the students still rely on their parents in economic. They can not earn
