Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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The recent years have witnessed a unfavorable phenomenon——many person are unemployed.As we all know ,with the increase of the population,more and more people cannot find the job to make a living. After serious thinking,we can find three possible reasons.First of all,it is a pathetic thing that the unemployed people are rapidly increasing and the weekly earnings