2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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failure is the mother of success.other argue that insisitance are more important than others. we can see lots of vivid examples that impressive,no one can easily success without millions of attempts.the greatest inventor eddison devoted his life to invent, millions of troubles around it,frienghted him out of invention of the light bub,even though,he insisted at the end and gained fame. just as our common,we can also fully understand it by practice,during our school days,even our daily life around us.we can see little child learn to walk,speak,read and any other things to detail it.however,adolecent seem to lake the spirit of attempt,insisitance,weak the wealth of we first owned. just do it with the oringinal thought and insist in the end,cooperate with our company,keeping good habit also important to the way to succes. attempt ,insist,and coperate with our partener,the success way is near you more clear.