2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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failure is the mother of success.Other argue that insisitence are more important than others. We can see lots of vivid examples that impressive,without millions of attempts no one can easily success.The greatest inventor Edison devoted his life to invent, millions of troubles around it,freinghted him out of the invention of the light bub,even though,he insisted at the end and gained famethat impressed the world though history. Just as our common,we can also fully understand it by practice,during school days,even daily life around us.we can see little babies learn to walk,speak,read and any other things to detail it.However,adolescent seem to lake the spirit of attemp,insisitence,the wealth that we first owned. Just do it with the oringinal thought and insist in the end,cooperate with our company,keeping good habit also important to the way of succes. attempt,insist,and coperate with our partner,the success way is near you more clear.