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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5513
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
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1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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There is a Phenomenon that childrencan't be independent .Some people think how did it happend?There are some reasons:first,a lot of parents help their children do many things,such as wash cloth and so on.second,children like play games and watch TV,they are used to following their parents' arragement. So,How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?In my view,parents can help their children by following methods.First,parents should let children do what they can do,such as wash cloth and buy the things themselves need.What's more,parents can let children choose their subjects if they like.Parents should belive their children and encourage them to become stronger.

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