2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；部分学术词汇用的不错，但拼写检查还需加强。

On Excessive Packaging In our life,we often notice many Excessive Packaging,which can make us fell uncomfortable. What does cause this phenominence?To myself,it's bisinesess that want to improve profit so that they can earn more money than ever before.In other words,some customers like to buy goods that were dressed by a lot of wonderful parttens. So,i must provide some views and advices as a consumer.First,any bisiness shoud think about customer's fellings when buying.Then ,we all know Excessive Packaging is wasting resources,which only cuase peple debeat it.Finally,environment shoud forbid them instead of encuoraging them to do anything they want .