2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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Failure is the mother of success.Other argue that insistence are more important than others. We can see lots of examples that impressive,without millions of attempts no one can easily success.The greatest inventor Edison devoted his life to inventing, millions of troubles,freighted him out of the invention of the bub,even though,he insisted at the end and gained fame that impressed the world though history. Just as our common,we can also fully understand it by practice,during school days,even daily life around us.We can see little babies learn to walk,speak,read and any other things to detail it.However,adolescent seem to lake the spirit of attempt,insistence,the wealth that we first owned. Just do it with the oringinal thought and insist in the end,cooperate with our company,keeping good habit also important to the way of success. Attempts,insistence,and cooperation with our partner,the successful way is near you more clear.