高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown used to be a little peaceful village with trees surounded, where fishes can be saw swimming in the clean water, where rough houses located beside the long and thin strees, where people worked for a simple life. Though it wasn't bustling but i love it. As the time , a decade past by. The development of industry makes it a little city, filled of moden buildings and shops, crowded with cars and people. As a result of bustling, green trees and clean water disappeared. I miss the old days, but if we keep polluting the envieroment, we can only get back to the old days in dream. To save our hometown, it's important and urgent to manage the pollution.