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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22880
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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My hometown used to be a peaceful little village with trees surrounded, where fishes can be seen swimming in the clean water, where rough houses located beside the long and thin streets, where people worked for a simple life. Though it wasn't bustling, I love it. As the wheel of time moving forward, a decade has passed by. The development of industry makes it a little city, filled of modern buildings and shops, crowded with cars and persons. As a result of industry development, green trees and clean water are replaced by noisy machineries and dirty rubbishs. I miss the old days, but if we keep polluting the envieroment, we can only get back to the old days in our dreams. To save our hometown, it's important and urgent to control the pollution.

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