高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

My hometown used to be a peaceful little village with trees surrounded, where fishes can be seen swimming in the clean water, where rough houses located beside the long and thin streets, where people worked for a simple life. Though it wasn't bustling, I love it. As the wheel of time moving forward, a decade has passed by. The development of industry makes it a little city, filled of modern buildings and shops, crowded with cars and persons. As a result of industry development, green trees and clean water are replaced by noisy machineries and dirty rubbish. I miss the old days, but if we keep polluting the envieroment, we can only get back to the old days in our dreams. To save our hometown, it's important and urgent to control the pollution.