句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段。
Nowdays, more and more students don't pay attention to English spelling, which is not benefit to their English study. What cause the phenomena? I think it is the test. Due to Enlish written isn't pretty important in Enlish test. In the opposite, teachers and students concentrate on Enlglish reading. For avoiding ignoring English spelling, in my point of view, both teachers and students should strive for it. As a teacher, should often emphasize the importance of spellng to students. And as s student, we should cleanly understand the purpose of study, not only for test. English is international using language, so we should learn it well in listening , speaking , reading , writting.