2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

In most chinese traditional's value,hard work is the core.Many pelope believe through their effect and hard work they will succeed in the future. Among many students who study abroad ,they have a strong belief that if they want to better than other people there is no other way but hard work.This situation is not only be find among students but also in the group of work people.People who work at the bottom of the company also have the same belief.We can see from many other phenomenons the hard work is a core value in chinese traditional concept. As we all know the practice is very important .And everyone is different from others .May you are not have special talent but hard work can help you to narrow the gap with others.So in my view if you have dreams and want realize them hard work is the best way . Believe it hard work can make different and the wisdom of ancient people's great will benefit us.