题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加。
Summary of “The Hidden Side of Happiness” In this paper “The Hidden Side of Happiness” by Kathleen McGowan is mainly focus on that people who can change for the better and gain the inherent capacity to bolster from the adversity they suffered. In fact, they will become stronger than before. If only had gone through tough and sore to whom could understand the true meaning of the life. the author provides three arguments: first, there are many value in one's life, happiness is just one of them, sometimes merely in a crisis situation can urge people to become more intelligent and selfless. He also use the example of Tracy Cyr who fight with the serious disease to prove this view. Then, the author continues to tell us the life eventually become rewarding and wonderful after suffered extreme horrible events. Finally, he use the example of parenting to explain the change of people actually caused by make effort in reality . Even though people are faced with constraints and struggles, they can still live a meaningful life.