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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33548
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分85.0分
评语:

作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Over the years have witnessed that making a buck progressively turns out to be a headache for graduates in such uncertain and turbulent business climate. Under the strain of competitive world how to strive and survive is a must for every walk of life, in particular for college students. Admittedly, undergraduates in the commonplace go on a great length to drive a hard bargain. Therefore, it is practicable and advisable that they look for variable ways to save a lot of money. The vast majority of undergraduates depend largely on the family' s financial support for tuition, accommodation, food and clothing. Some even pay amount of money on the examination certificates to qualify the knowledge, skills and ability. There is no doubt that their families has to work moil and toil to ensure such costly expenditure. But for the effort of families, how can we live on such comfortable life? On the other hand, here and there is the purchase discount when go shopping or surf on Amazon, which to a large extent capture our attention. By virtue of different discount strategies used by sales retailer, a specific consuming strategy enable students how to be cost-saving and irrational. Smart consuming is the best policy. Not only for the sake of our family we cut down the budget, but we learn the way to adopt a carrot and stick measure on purchasing, that is to say, we pay it more worthwhile! To sum up, focusing on merchandise with incentives does not indicate the selfishness and foolishness of a students. Instead, it train a person to be more responsible for his or her family and budget management.

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