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Living in a internet developed epoch,I believed most of the people have the experience of shopping on line. It is very convinience that you can stay at home using your computer, just input the things you want, and it will show you lots of styles for your choose. Save time and it won't be tried as shoping on street, especially, a same goods but the price will be cheaper than buy it at a real shop. However, it is also being with some thing not satisfying , for example, throughing the picture you cannot judge exactly for the color, size and the quality. once you receive the thihg you bought and found it is not good as you expected and you want to return it back then you have to pay the express fee and also it will waste your time to search another one. Anyway, I thought internet developed is inevitable, and online shopping is a important part of it. People will find the way to improve it and make it more reasonable.
