题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中词汇表达用的较灵活,同时能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;请注意分段。
Nowadays , with the developing of economics , we trade and cooperate with each other far more fluently. But a part of people cheat in this process .For instance , a company sells fake products to you , cooperator betray commitments , you say you will come soon but you donot ,etc. As we all know, it is incorrect that we cheat each other . if we treat friends with this attitude , we must lose their trust and friendship evenly,helping with each other will not happened again , which is sad to you .