题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;请注意分段。
Nowadays, with the developing of the society , we trade and cooperate with each other far more fluently. But a part of people cheat in this process.For instance, a company sells fake products to you , cooperator betray commitments , you say that you will come soon but you donot ,etc. As we all know, it is incorrect that we cheat each other. if we treat friends with this attitude, we must lose their trust and friendship evenly,helping with each other will not happened again, which is sad to you .