题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;请注意分段。
Nowadays, with the development of the society , we trade and cooperate with each other far more fluently. But a part of people cheat in this process.For instance, a company sells fake products to you, cooperator betray commitments, you say that you will come soon but you do not. As we all know, it is incorrect that we cheat each other. if we treat friends with this attitude, we must lose their trust and friendship evenly, helping with each other will not happened again, which is sad to you .