2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the development of the technology,more and more people like to use computers.Computer has more benefits.For excample,people can chat with their friends who don't stay the same place by computer.Sometimes,people can go shopping and study by computer,this are very convenient for man.But,all things both have two apartment,computer will make people are addicted to computergames,the best importent is that it is bad for healthy. In my oppinion,as long as people can ritional use of computer,I believe that computer can bring more benifits for people.