题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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From the long-term perspective, maintaining trust is benefical to eachother especially when you are in trouble. But how to maintian trust? As far as I am concerned,Firstly, do not always lie to your friendes and other people. Secondly, cultivate an hongest quality. Thirdly, communicate with your friendes and point out their drawbacks in an happy way.