题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中学术词汇使用熟练,拼写检查还要更加认真;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
From the long-term perspective, maintaining trust is beneficial to each other especially when you are in trouble. But how to maintain trust? As far as I am concerned,Firstly, do not always lie to your friends and other people. Secondly, cultivate a hongest quality. Thirdly, communicate with your friends and point out their drawbacks in a pleasent way.