题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者学术词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇丰富度要加强;错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
From the long-term perspective, maintaining trust is beneficial to each other especially when you are in trouble. Nevertheless, how to maintain trust? As far as I am concerned,Firstly, do not always lie to your friends and other people. Secondly, cultivate an honest quality. Thirdly, communicate with your friends and point out their drawbacks in private. There is no denying that maintaining trust is important to us.As it was said above. keeping trust plays an increasingly important role in premoting friendship. Besides, it is indispensable to bulid a harmony society