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I am nervous,because we will have a new teacher to teach us today.Mayme she is very serious. She is coming with a big smeil,she is thin and tall,looking so pretty.Of couse,she voice is make me comfortable.I like her. Although she is gentle,her lesson is so funny,and all of us felt happy.she is not my teacher,she just my friend.