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With rapid development of economy, internet become more and more prevalent nowadays . In 1990s china, we merely see person siting before a computer and getting on line, but it is remarkablely changed recently . As far as I am concerned, two aspects contribute to the changes. On the one hand, in contemporary society a multitude of people can offord a device to get on line ,like tablets,laps, smartphones. On the other hand, it is the methods which we communicate with each other. Almost ten yeas ago, communicating was proceeded by face to face mostly
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